"The Admin Is Watching..."....by Xavious Anetico

[Xavious]

Valor Edgeways is a troubled soul; an army at his disposal, servants to tend to his every whim, and all the riches a man could want. But he is cursed. All his life he has fled from his fears, only to chase himself deeper into the abyss of his own mind. Soon it will all come to a point. The dreadful climax will come upon his spirit, and he will be forced to enter the realm of his own dispair...

In these lands, he is known simply as 'Admin'...

With him will be his loyal followers and friends, specialists in thier field, and without them Admin would be lost. Aran Powdermill, a wise-cracking bard from the richest taverns and inns; Mal Valone, a whore with a violent side; Roland Deschain, a sharp-shooter, heralded as the greatest in the field; and the dark spirit who they know only as Krylla.

Admin sets out to cleanse the land of the evil Retainers, and to redeem his own soul.

On the outskirts of Laernu, the Jraaks are gathering...

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A little taster for you all. I don't know where this is going to end up, but i got to thinking about it yesterday when i read a certain post by someone. Can't think why...Stay tuned for:

Act I -- Constituency.

[Smirftsch]

i think the best place for that would be the "anything else" board...

[Xavious]

Bleh move it if you like, it's a good story though, planning out nicely in my head.

[Shambler]

Sounds like a blurry rip of The Dark Tower

[Xavious]

Youve read the dark tower!!?!?!??! I've hardly met anyone else who's read it!!!

But thats basically why I'm naming him Roland Deschain, after my favourite book charecter.

[Buster]

THE GUNSLINGER IS MY HERO ... The Dark Tower is the best SK has done !! In fact, it's the "nexus" of his ENTIRE twisted Universe - like at the end of Insomnia ... and the picture scralled by the kid in the stands !!

ROLAND for Prime Minister / President ... RULER of Earth !!

[Xavious]

YES! THATS RIGHT! ITS NOT JUST THE BEST SK HAS DONE, ITS THE BEST BOOK IN EXISTENCE! WOOOO! ROLAND DESCHAIN FOREVER! WOOOOOOO!

Oh but wasn't that ending just terrible! I mean, from a litterary point of view, it was an excellent ending, but for me, who had become very attached to the charecters, it was heart-breaking...I was feeling physically sick for like a week after reading it...

Oh btw, im scrapping the admin is waiting story for now, i had a better idea...